Wednesday, February 8, 2006

0414 This Other Eden, Demi-Paradise..Yeah? Comments

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Eden lives.. in the misty
mountains, jungle-thick,
of Papua New Guinea..
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Michael Shepherd
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Raynette Eitel 08 February 2006

Michael, the descriptions within your poem are lovely, but I disagree with Tomas. The ending is what the poem is about, and I find it chilling and thought provoking. Nice work. Raynette

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