041. The Joy Of The Sunrise Comments

favorite lines so far: laughing children play in the sea releasing them from the stern orders of their parents fun for them comes first......................BUT! ............................Sharks! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! the topic: happiness and you have described it in one fine way! ! ! to MyPoemList. sometimes i am (almost) amazed at how..........ok, i'll say it, wonderful some of your poems are. and the others aren't too shabby either! ! a fine poem, my friend. bri ;)

Nicely penned. The sea is a comforting place.