04 The Real Theory Of Relativity Comments

What, no mention of E=mc Hammer? Who? Seriously though, here's something into which one is able to sink the ole mental masticators. Just the way I like 'em. Are we talkin' the general or special theory? At any rate, my mendulla oblongata is throbbin' now. Hail, hail, the ganglia's all here!

Lori, great scene development and visual images. Really interesting with a great ending... relatively speaking, of course. Awesome poem! ! Brian

a sharp piece of writing, Lori. clever, ironic, very fresh in what it's saying. i'm glad i spotted this and hope to read more of your poems here.

Lovely piece. A unusual meeting of the poets, seen in your own way. A pleasure to read this. Love Ernestine XXX

Enjoyed this. Very creative and unique, with a fitting ending. -chuck

Thanks for drawing all these characters together in one place, Lori, and for allowing us to listen to their random, characteristic ramblings. A highly enjoyable piece of writing. Regards to you, Lori.