04 Lost (My Favourite) Comments

Hello Athul, I am so glad to read your poems. Keep it up. Tell sushant to start writing too, he too wrote wonderful pieces of composition.

this is very well done. =) good job.

this is really good. it says really well what i think we've all experienced at some stage hard concept to explain. well done

Good one, very familiar situation in a very articulate manner. I must say it is always a sigh of relief to know you are not alone.

I dont like it. I love it. You explain here something I could never explain... Why do I get lost in my dreams? ... That is how I feel sometimes but waking up also freaks me out... And dont ask me why...

nice poem. how many times i too have got lost in my dreams. only to discover with relief i am safe at home.

Understandably this is your favourite. You've expressed very well an unconscious fear of desertion. In a child it's a normal dream but few people are able to write a so fine poem.

A nice dream.......................!

how many times i have got lost in my dreams. what a relief when we fynd it was a dream', nice poem

not bad... r u really 10 years old? haha... if u r... keep it up... better than me when i was 10years old... keep on riting dude!