Sunday, April 26, 2009

04/26/2009 Relentless Love ♥ Comments

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Shocked almost forgot what you did to me
I was hurting in every part of me
I was sad knowing this is how it came to be
But still I am happy knowing you care for me
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Coreena Dejesus
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Angelic Warrior 26 August 2009

love is never forgotten by the heart.....even if thing go sour people you love become a part of you......beautiful write...very nice :)

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Barry A. Lanier 26 April 2009

While love at times fails and leaves the pain, memories always linger, an so remain...excellent cartharsis of emotion and feelings...

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the beauty of that hidden love shown very well in your words..well done

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Hannah Benson 26 April 2009

tears run down my face i felt what you said its very touching i love it keep writing so you can share your poems with the world

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Saadat Tahir 26 April 2009

strong and emotive nice lines cheers

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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