Tuesday, February 25, 2014

039. After The Battle Comments

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A pinprick of light appears
in the blackness of unconsciousness
a sign of exit from the dark
then the light hits me
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 11 November 2016

cool! i agree with Sofia's first sentence. the second sentence of her comment shows that she is NOT familiar with your marvelously silly poems! her 3rd sentence is spot on. a terrific ending: I look at the candle by my bed I will not be put out so easily to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Sofia Kioroglou 26 September 2015

I love your way of expressing your feelings through writing. All of your poems are somehow tinged with pain and poignancy but I really like that! Well done!

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