Sunday, April 10, 2005

0376 Self-Search Comments

Rating: 2.4

Hey, Self - how do I know that you exist?
Or are you just a word - a useful term
for what we hope our real nature is,
those things about us which we're proud to affirm?
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Michael Shepherd
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John Tiong Chunghoo 10 April 2005

dear michael, i gave it a six. this poem reminds me of one of my own poems the name of which i have forgotten. too many to remember.

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Michael Shepherd 10 April 2005

Like I've already said, Dr Nehrlich, let's keep the personal abuse to the private message service, and cease confusing newcomers to this wonderful store of poetry?

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Herbert Nehrlich1 10 April 2005

Michael, this is not a good poem. It may however, judging by the title, be something that the doctor ordered. I still cannot believe how you reacted in this mess. Guess one always needs to be on guard for surprises. H

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Monica Engeler 10 April 2005

This was interesting perspective here. The rhyming is a little forced here, but you get away with it. Simple and good. Nice read.

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