Wednesday, February 23, 2005

0358 One For Bill Comments

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Michael Shepherd
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Michael Shepherd 23 February 2005

oh cripes, 'Rusty', now it all makes sense...so no more jokes about 'Dusty' then?

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Rusty Daily 23 February 2005

Michael, Just to let you know from one who has red hair, the onset of gray tends to subdue the fire to barely glowing embers. North and South. lol Rusty

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Sean Furlong 23 February 2005

I enjoyed this poem. I want to say it feels like all the words are tidy and in their right place. The rhyme and rhythm schemes work well.

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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