Wednesday, October 26, 2005

0357 On Not Thinking About People You Thought You Loved Comments

Rating: 2.2

I’d been reading some poems with
– for the first time in my life that I remember –
‘a lump in my throat’; and a pricking in my eyes,
and a sense of the awesome power of that poet
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Michael Shepherd
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Uriah Hamilton 26 October 2005

A very lovely sensitive poem, I had read Max's first, I see the beautiful influence.

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Raynette Eitel 26 October 2005

Ah Michael, what seeds you planted with this poem! I think we will see poems about mothers sprouting up all over PH...and that is so good. Excuse me while I go start on mine. Raynette

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Gillian.E. Shaw 26 October 2005

A sort of confession. I enjoyed the poem immensely perhaps because it is an conscientious account and told with skill.

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Max Reif 26 October 2005

I just read 'The Writer's Almanac' for today, and can easily imagine seeing this poem there. Well told, this tale of the impossibility of putting 'self' out of the picture. The two parts of the poem work together because the flow of your voice is utterly natural and the epiphany is described just as it happened.

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Cj Heck 26 October 2005

Excellent poem, Michael. What a gift to be given, a beautiful insight into your mother. Your poem is then your gift to us, your readers. I loved it. Warmest regards, CJ

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Mary Nagy 26 October 2005

It takes alot to make me cry but this really got to me........this is beautiful Michael. Truly beautiful! It is so touching to feel such love directed at your mother. (By the way, your poet friend has nothing on you........you write wonderfully touching poems) This is a great example. Sincerely, Mary

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