(03) - Rise Of The Dead Comments

You are sooo great at writing. I loved this one. =] -Janelle<3

This is the first one of your work that I have read. A vampire poem? I'll admit I am a bit biased against the subject, but I am going to read further. I am hoping to find that you will be using the vampire imagery to express something you relate to in existence as a living person. It wouldn't be enough to just paint a picture allowing your readers to decipher that we are dealing with a vampire poem. I am going to read this one again and I will also read some of your other 'Dead' poems as well.

A female...okay. Very curious now...Write another one! :) adria