Monday, May 8, 2006

(03) Once It So Happened Comments

Rating: 2.6

Once it so happened that
I sat pondering in wonder,
Thinking that way, asking myself,
'Will I ever reach that yonder? '
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Lubna S. Khan
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Catastrophe King 03 August 2006

VERY GOOD LUBNA! Keep the tempo going.... you do have some wonderful verses up your sleeve.... I feel this deserves a complete 10.

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Abid Khan 10 July 2006

very deep lubna, keep it up, great, x abid

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Lubna S. Khan

Lubna S. Khan

Dahanu, Maharashtra, India
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