[03] My Hundred Lines Comments

decision itself hanged.......... what a powerful line............... please read my one liners from poem no 146. please read you and i (poem no 206)

A well written poem....... U get 10++++...........

Amazing. An eloberated poem. Very well penned.

an eloberate poem skillfully written. shan

hello sir! ! ..first sorry took time to read this one... i had to take time and read it... busy with universty too.... hey got to say i never expected this sorta one from you, but this one has the same liveliness, and yes, rhymes, alliteration all make this an exhilarating experience 10++++ regards shan

Excellent write Ashraful...great read too...10+++

every thing in poetry made in hundred lines......metaphor, alliteration, rhyming and many other things......super poem.....super poet.....in a super site.....wow! ! !

superb, superb, superb...... it's a marvelous write sarkar with depths in it, the whole poem is amazingly beautiful specially these lines...... 'Still amazing dreams beckon Playing snake-ludo with soul Snakes biting— restarting every time I lost both legs— but going ahead on crawl' this resembles like me as if i was reading my own thoughts through your masterful pen...thanks 100++++++++++++++++++ and definitely added to one of my most favs....... rgds asif

A hundred lines of crativity intelligence great imagery inspiration! I am trully amazed. Thanks for sharing! Best wishes, ana

I now have you as a new friend because of your hundred lines. this poem is a little longer than I normally like, but the flow, and imagery are so vivid, and the story told so poetically well done it held my attention to the end thanks for sharing 10+++

It was a lengthy poem so I couldn't read it all. My concentration is short. Liked what I did read.

Artistic! ! super piece! ! love 10..

Amazing imagination.so creative - thank you 10++++++++++

''Trees uprooted with fruitless shaking'' a visual metaphor of this poem belonging to symbolism Life is really the most important reality of this earth and in a day, if we are not careful it could vanish in eternal darkness..10++

This is description of a long event seen through the eyes of poet, very distinctly and without other's knowledge, the recollectionis extremely forceful, days and nights, the tangential view, surrealistic in nature. Such pieces also need energy and imagination. Congrats, Ashraful.10++

emotional and interesting write! : -)

This is a unique poem that attracted my attention. 10+++

Unique & well crafted my friend. Keep up the fine work. Regards, Trade.

Well done, a very strongly written poem, i like alot,10 from me

It is an amazing deep poem, I am still reflecting on it. Thanks for the invite J. L.