[03] House Lizards Comments

i see two broken tails dancing...... ah! poetry......... please read the poems from no 132 to 140 in my poetry collection. these poems are written by and written on my little sister Silssa, who died of cancer. these are the poems she wrote to fight against cancer. please read and comment.

very well expressed lines....10

This is surely a deep and meaningful poem. Being an observer as you are, your imagination has taken us to your profound conclusion. Thank you Ashraful! 10 Karin Anderson

powerful and evocative imagery and so well-expressed

you know sir! ! every one who visit u must be thinking..'oh gosh! ! i wish i can write like this'.. i don't know, i wish i can write such sweet ones..... great one indeed A++ regards shan

great imagination out of observation...good poet you are Ashraf...thanks...10

Very beautiful and deep fable, you are very clever man, Ashraful..10... Sincerely, Tsira

It's seldom one comes across a poet, who can masterly connect love making lizatds to complicated human living, excellent and fluent.10+++

In my eyes you have just become DR.hakiu! . in the Traditional form connecting things of the Earth to man and under GOD. Very well expressed. I know you probly don't keep a score as I do not, but I give this one a 10+++ have a blessed day

great content and well penned...deeply refelctive well done cheers

Ashraful, This is such a lovely poem, and to think you wrote it about something so simple as lizards. My poem surrender is like that, i wrote it sitting on the beach in galveston. i was just over come with the surise and the poem was one that almost wrote itself. your friend in poetry Barbie

Ashraful, This is such a lovely poem, and to think you wrote it about something so simple as lizards. My poem surrender is like that, i wrote it sitting on the beach in galveston. i was just over come with the surise and the poem was one that almost wrote itself. your friend in poetry Barbie

how do u create this lofty write out of nothing like watching house lizards.....ur thinking goes too far...! ! ! ! ! Hats off! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

... Fortune burns life effectively; what a conclusion, sir!

a beautiful painting loved by all......... as the poem carries beautiful concept.......

wnderful poem with beautiful images

amazing piece on lizards relating to human life...10++