[03] Grief Comments

But grief cuts heart With a silent scissor As soft like marmalade As sour as tamarind.. grief, death, kites, ladies........ so many thoughts in such a short poem. thank you dear poet. tony

Terrific insight...keep up the good work...Jeff.

A very beautiful poem, well -penned and well- thought of. Interesting philosophical questions to raise too, whether grief is final and fatal or not...I think grief is unescapable yet we can overcome it if we search deep inside for strength and if we excavate our hearts to search for the precious moments of joy and bring them to the surface...

lovely scripted... 'grief cuts heart.. like a silent scissor'.. wonderful...10++++.

I can clearly see why your poems are in the top 500. Well done, you deserve it as your words are pure poetry!

Is the grief final As the death? For one and all Living and non-livings? ...... what an indepth and philosophical thinking, inspiring about universal thinking..... good and powerful thinking...10

A lovely piece indeed....

Liked your verse...Brishti Mazumdar

Thoughtful poem, depicted with sensitivity.

involves all the senses, well done

A lovely flowing poem, it is sad b ut has a beauty of its own. Grief is something we all experience, but it is how we handle it and for how long that determines its outcome. Happy memories and no attachment is the best.

sadl true, well written

now there is a poem i can relate to. every word was so meaningful but, true. :)

original turn of phrase and imagery is unique

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My thought is provoked Grief can never be a Death It has a cure, its not cancer Cure is...ACTION - Go to the root of grief Console it, Confine it After all, The powerful mind just can't surrender To the so called Grief. Thanks for making me act on this poem. Good subject indeed.

Reality, its what this poem has. The last question..no doubt this poem was great. You're such a great poet! !