[03] Black Angel Comments

Beware of the world...Black Angels abound in dreams, n, life wake up call in this poem indeed, excellent imagey +++++10 regards

Piece of thin ribbon Scorching sunlight Entered as a snake Through the window And bite my leg A dagger is pushed Into the skin—I wake up... evils in form come and bite us. we experience it daily in our dreams, , , beautiful write and deseves 10

i loved this poem..is is true snake as snakes can be in many shapes and this poem fit what is happening these days..did i tell you about ho cheat in rating..it seems some one dcrease your rating..that one of the true snakes too as some they put 10++on the page but in the box less than that once one cute gut put for me 3..cheers...beautiful meaningful poem

Excellent imagery Ashraful....10+++

Your words draw the reader into your world that you are creating.

i love your poem it's a good one

A beautiful picture you paint Sleep that settles On a summer's noon The wilting plants Mirages on tar roads All that we usually see Painted so vividly The dark rain clouds Welcomed with delight As a black angel Not evil though - But As a gift from God given To nature and to man! Thanks sir, for inviting me to read your poems. Angel

abstract words painted in the sky give life to every poet who draw on lines snakes are always a sign of improving as it pictures black angel's mind..grace

The touch of sunlight you have compared to a snake bite! ! ! .....excellent, a beautiful write...a beautiful title, a pleasant read!

shaft of light and stream of water.......... poetry rains.......

A Piece of thin ribbon Scorching sunlight Entered as a snake Through the window And bite my leg A dagger is pushed Into the skin—I wake up....bravo, bravo.... I love that dark angel too, which you said in this master piece and I think it's the rainy clouds, I might be wrong but anyways I love the way of your writing style, Sarkar which makes reader think of multiple feelings....thanks many 10'ssssss rgds asif

Very good my dear friend.

clever write!

Wow! It is really an interesting poem sir.I love you black angel

interesting poem, . different approach nice though.. sir try bit, not bite.

Interesting poem. It is enrapturing with the way of handing over to contents and it is attesting to the excellent method of the Author. I am reading with a great pleasure. (10v.) Maria Barbara Korynt

nice and thoughtful poem.

Black Angel is unleashed in the last stanza....to shower I suppose

This is beautiful in its expression and in the way the imagination of the reader is brought into play.

Lovely piece Ashraful.....leaving the reader with many images and interpretations 10