[03] Alive Comments

A pointed and meaningful piece, sir

great rhyming poem ashraf

A nice poem..and full of image words.. and very fluent... and thanks for your nice comment on my poem/ A target/

Eid Greetings to you and your family! May it be a blissful day! Regrads

I loved the philosophy hidden behind the poetic imagery! 10+ -Raj Nandy

seperating life into slices makes everything more palateable.

beautiful words & imagination thanks...

The Tribute - heartfelt & excellent Your Ingenuiety - I bow to! Simple on the surface We have to delve deep And ponder still Before we gather The Pearls within! Angel

close your eyes don't say a word on the edge of life u r still alive..... imagination outright is eye catching.... beautiful words said......10

.... On the edge of moment You are still alive! Beautiful and touchy. Great poem! ! 10+++

On the edge of moment You are still alive! So true...Wonderful it is that you take so few words to express so strong a message....Brishti Mazumdar

a simple thought u hav composed in such a wonderful way wid this slice stuff n all...i njoyed reading..10++.

Good structure, I never considered life as slices, but this seems realistic.

lovely tribute...this one

love this, vivid and evocative

Powerful and so honest a tribute!

woooooooooow love it

your poems, and this one is the best example so far that I have read, have deeply spiritual meaning with undertow of philosophy. I read and reread them. I will continue to work my way through them. Thank you for all your effort.

Simple, beautiful and lovely imagery...definitely deserves to be in the top 500 poems..Cheers 10+++

It is a wonderful poem.Its message is that the essence of the existence means the continuing life in death.The degrees of comparison are phases of feelings, because we need feelings to survive.I think that this poem belongs of a genius mind.