Sunday, June 7, 2009

[03] Affluent Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Desire came and hugged
Dream called and kissed
Appetite detained me and
Kicked— on the rend life
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Ashraful Musaddeq
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Rachel Butler 09 November 2009

'Space is my latent existence Affluent love— silent killer' Rachel Ann Butler

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Surayya Abbas 03 August 2009

A Nice style.Nice to read.

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 June 2009

'Affluent love— silent killer ' ohhhh...yes sir..you always come up with something special! ! ! ! ! 10+++ enjoyed this one very one...some people say my ones are bit too long...well i m not good at writing, , short, sweet awesome poems at all..hats off! ! ! !

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 20 June 2009

Space in my latent existence.affluent love silent killer...awesom sir.

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Antonio Liao 20 June 2009

just wondeful and awesome poem...its only in you....God bless.....a 10+

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rago rago 18 June 2009

love with the creatures....... let the affluent love flow from depth..... see my 10 ++

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Malini Kadir 17 June 2009

genuine, raw......realistic

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Mamta Agarwal 17 June 2009

very innovative presentation..i read it several times, liked it a lot still feel missed something. Mamta

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 16 June 2009

thats so different...a unique and innovative style of expression... : -)

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Pandian Angelina 13 June 2009

Poet come, please teach me What you sing, I sit below 'Neath the shade of the Banyan tree Poet come, please I wait for thee! I say, Wha! Wha! ! with wide open eyes Angel

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John Tiong Chunghoo 11 June 2009

this is lovely ashraf.

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Vidi Writes 11 June 2009

Affluent Love, rush of blood Not knowing what not to do. What not happens... Still a feel of nothing.... Yes its truly... a silent killer. But who wouldn't prefer this giant killer? ! Good one. Thank you.

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Rosalinda Martinez 11 June 2009

i like this poem very much. thanks for your poems.

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Rosalinda Martinez 11 June 2009

i like this very poem! thanks for your poems.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 June 2009

beauty parades by affluence wonder seems to redound by love...excellent write, yet of unique genre,10+++, thanks for sharing

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T McH 10 June 2009

Excellent and accurate juxtaposition in that last line. t x

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 June 2009

Great work! Yes, love is a silent killer; and, we have to be very careful along the paths of love. Thank you. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Raj Arumugam 10 June 2009

another original and wonderful poem in this haiku-Ashraful style

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Oneline Poet 09 June 2009

Wonderful Poem! ! ! ! Love it

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 09 June 2009

Wonderful write with a nice rhyming. Kudos friend.

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Ashraful Musaddeq

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