Desire came and hugged
Dream called and kissed
Appetite detained me and
Kicked— on the rend life
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'Affluent love— silent killer ' ohhhh...yes sir..you always come up with something special! ! ! ! ! 10+++ enjoyed this one very one...some people say my ones are bit too long...well i m not good at writing, , short, sweet awesome poems at all..hats off! ! ! !
Space in my latent existence.affluent love silent killer...awesom sir.
just wondeful and awesome poem...its only in you....God bless.....a 10+
love with the creatures....... let the affluent love flow from depth..... see my 10 ++
very innovative presentation..i read it several times, liked it a lot still feel missed something. Mamta
thats so different...a unique and innovative style of expression... : -)
Poet come, please teach me What you sing, I sit below 'Neath the shade of the Banyan tree Poet come, please I wait for thee! I say, Wha! Wha! ! with wide open eyes Angel
Affluent Love, rush of blood Not knowing what not to do. What not happens... Still a feel of nothing.... Yes its truly... a silent killer. But who wouldn't prefer this giant killer? ! Good one. Thank you.
beauty parades by affluence wonder seems to redound by love...excellent write, yet of unique genre,10+++, thanks for sharing
Great work! Yes, love is a silent killer; and, we have to be very careful along the paths of love. Thank you. Edward Kofi Louis.
another original and wonderful poem in this haiku-Ashraful style
'Space is my latent existence Affluent love— silent killer' Rachel Ann Butler