03 A Grain Of Rice Comments

***** and.....to 'my favorites', wherever THEY are kept. Are they kept? WHERE? ? ? bri : )

Styx: 'there are multiple rivers named Styx, including rivers in Alabama, Ohio, and Oregon (states in the USA) . Also: In Greek mythology, Styx also called the River Styx, is a goddess and river of the Underworld.'

'The Flood', .....Noah's (and maybe everyone else's) flood in the Bible? ? ? Just a 'story' I think, but I enjoyed it as a child (the story, not the flood) .

I paused at the ending, staring at the last two lines. Then I let out a gentle laugh. I also figured that the 'flame' was probably there to boil the water.

Are you, Unnikrishnan S. M., in the photo? I think I may see you.... a bit to the left of center. Why....I've eaten rice grains larger than this poem ***** & a favorite.

This poem shared on PoemHunter on the 21 June 2016 still interests readers. So happy about it.

Beautifully penned poem. The ending of the poem is perfect. Great writing.

" Sarah Samarbaf rated a poem titled 03 A Grain Of Rice 5- start ratings"… thank you, Dear Poet Ms Samarbaf

This poem beautifully captures the feeling of confinement and the yearning for freedom, using vivid language to express the desire to escape overwhelming circumstances.

" Winner Nehra rated a poem titled 03 A Grain Of Rice 4- start ratings" Thank you, Poet Nehra

Is it the formidable longing of an escapist?

Craving freesome with the fire inside! Superb

A fig of imagination and a glimpse of an ancient culture

the poem vividly depicts the yearning for freedom, even in the face of overwhelming odds. The imagery of the rice grain and the dramatic wish for escape evoke a powerful sense of longing. a good one.

Poet Magadha Rani has added this poem to her favourites. Thank you Dear Poet Magadha for faving this poem

Your symbolic use of ' grain of rice' made this poem adorable.

I like this poem because I find it figurative. Figurative to arrive at certain conclusion and likeness which I want to pose!

Part uh..4 or 5---Thank you for writing in depth about life--you have a singular voice---tons of stars on this piece!

Part 3. Hope I made sense--but I can't dip a toe in your poetry, I am drawn to submerge myself in them

part 2. You take the ordinary things of life and use them to describe the similarities in the differences.