03/23/2008 Volcano Of Emotion ♥ Comments
Screaming in the inside,
Filled with hate and rage.
Appearance lovely from the outside,
Emotions are locked in a cage.
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heart when rocked by the fire smiles as caged up by rage heart seems to frazzled by the blow lava yet to errupt by the wrath as when rused................extremely poignant and hurtful love, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , smudged over when uncared....well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing
Pique, and passsion elicit with much fury & verve...Powerful, and stalwart expression....and a fine poetic depiction of the mercrial minds display of controlled chaos.Very Nicely done, Coreena. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
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7/18/2025 9:03:07 PM # 1.0.0
good poem.I liked first twi stanzas very well..........