Wednesday, March 19, 2008

03/19/2008 Love Lost Depressed Comments

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My heart belongs to someone I love,
Someone I constantly think of.
Strong woman don't cry not a tear,
Supposed to lock up show no fear.
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Coreena Dejesus
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Jibin Joseph 21 March 2008

the hurtful feeling well potrayed i agree with vidyadhr it sure makes me cry thanks for sharing peace jibin

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 20 March 2008

Nice way of expressing deep emotions.....I would say nothing is permenent in this world.Try to love you more then rest fall in line.Nothing more than you.Your life is precious.No one can tear your heart.........It is you who can decide and go ahead...........Imagery is good in poetry only to have better impact which is there in your poem it is impressive so much that it makes me cry.....

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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