03/11/2008 Reality Of Disgust Comments

You have addressed a very relevant issue in your poem. Hope the world wakes up, if not atleast the mothers do, before its too late. Thanks.

Not unfortunately an unusual story best nipped in the bud before things get too bad/ I have read some of your poetry with interest You have a natural talent for rhyming but no apparent idea of meter. It is meter which allows your poetry to flow when read aloud Which is in effect the acid test as poetry is essentially an oral art form

yes some times these delicate things need to be controlled before unknowing damage is caused....a strong write.......

Of course disgusting, but nothing can be done!