03/11/2008 'Love' No A 'Virus' Comments

Hi Coreena! ! I simply adored this one. You have so much passion when you write. And to be so young.LOL I am honored..

well, dear lady with a passionate pen's fury writing wonderful poem full of melody at some point its true love is a poison ivy as I have taste it when my heart cried painfully when a love of mine loved someone like me for being enchanted to behold another love's beauty. thanks ad bes wishes, melvin

This might be a slightly too extreme view of love, in my opinion. Sometimes, that flower has no choice but to be picked, and after it is, it will not ever be the same. Still, a flower brings joy to the person it is given to. A flower can be pressed and retain its beauty for years to come. It has the potential to create things that will last longer than the flower itself. And remember, even if you pick an iris, the rest of the plant is still there, and will continue to flower for years to come, if it is taken care of. Just make sure that plant doesn't die on you, and you'll find a good gardener for it someday.

Just love the person the best way you can and every thing will be alright.......

Well if you think that love is all about spending money, then probably you will end up like that picked up iris... I believe there are so many things that can be shared and done together with your partner and you don't need to spend a penny for them... In a way I agree with you - love can be compared to a virus, but it is a truly wonderful thing, nothing to do with any infections... A' propos infections - take vitamin C plus zink and you'll beat everything right away Lol

Look at Love as a divine manifestation! Let us love all and serve all!

Your poem is rather cynical for one so young. You've obviously had a few disappointments in your life. I believe that it's important to see love as a verb, not a noun - something to do rather than fall in. Like your used of rhyming couplets. It's distinctive and works a treat. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

What an interesting, deceptively complex poem! Nicely written!

good one...true love is a virus...n it spread really fast...