Monday, March 10, 2008

03/10/2008 B Death - Not Accepting Not Adapting R.I.P Virginia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tear drops streaming down,
Everyone with a permanent frown,
Sensing the sadness in the room,
The shock the situation hit with a boom.
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Coreena Dejesus
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Kholekile Monakali 14 September 2008

nice poem....I enjoyed it a lot readind it keep it up! ! ! ! ! !

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Sandra Fowler 27 March 2008

Sadness falls like a shadow across the lines of this elegy to the memory of Virginia. You honor her with this poem. I am sorry for your loss. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Andrew Blakemore 12 March 2008

A beautiful and most touching poem Coreena. Very well written indeed. Andrew

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Ivor Hogg 12 March 2008

each of us will go in our turn Although I do blieve we meet again in other lives

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Ivor Hogg 12 March 2008

each of us will go in our turn Although I do blieve we meet again in other lives

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Subbaraman N V 12 March 2008

Death has its own rhyme and reason, logic and blessings! Let us understand and accept! We will not shed tears!

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Alison Cassidy 12 March 2008

This lyrical, heartfelt poem comes from great pain and sadness. I'm convinced though that this place, for all it's darkness, is nonetheless a very fertile source of creative expression and your poem certainly reinforces my belief. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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