03/08/2008 Depressing Moment Comments

life is a rave up by hours and days years when move yet by gales and pains as the two sides of a coin when twined as when blessed by the divine bliss.............beautiful peace, i like it, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

oh this is sad...thanks for sharing.

I think we all have days like that. I like how you end the poem with the prayer and hope. That is what keeps lots of us going. Another ten. Sincerely, Connie Webb