Saturday, March 8, 2008

03/08/2008 Deployed Troop Comments

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I'm getting ready for bed I begin to think,
My life change with just a little bit of ink.
Where could I have been instead of here,
My eyes dropping yet another tear.
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Coreena Dejesus
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Abhilash Gopi 01 December 2008

It is the same sad story of our troops anywhere in the world. T'is beautifully captured in these lines. Thank you.

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C.R. Clark 08 March 2008

A great, heartfelt poem, Coreena.Most certainly, our troops need and deserve all the support we can possibly give. Thank you for your wonderful poem and for your sacrifice. Best regards, Richard

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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