Friday, March 7, 2008

03/07/2008 Would You Comments

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I find myself dreaming about you,
Would you be my one and only boo?
Would you actually stand by my side,
Love me even after I have cried?
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Coreena Dejesus
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Kash Earley 22 March 2008

to the point. excellent. just a thought. they all would...in the beginning. Like yo stuff.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 09 March 2008

nice love poem, well done, thanks for sharing

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Rommel Filoteo 09 March 2008

It's so deeply in your own expressive way that you helped us understand what is the true meaning of a person in love, and come into my our person once more. Lovely piece! -Rommel

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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