03/07/2008 Eyes Wide Open Comments
How can one person make someone so confused,
All you think is that you have been accused.
Don't you realize I believe them this time,
My friend? What my friend oh that’s such grime.
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This prosesque style verse moves fast, yet mellifluous.Its monologue commands & delivers its message with darting verve & poignance...Solid crafting, Coreena! ~ FjR ~
'Thank you to my friends that opened my eyes for me to see! ' This line justifies an accusatory tonality …
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7/18/2025 8:30:25 PM # 1.0.0
Strong one. Justifiably so! Enjoyed the poem!