Thursday, March 6, 2008

03/06/2008 Kiss, First Or Last ♥ Comments

Rating: 4.4

Heart beating as if I was a teen,
Trying hard not to be heard nor seen,
First kiss wasn't supposed to lead to more,
Felt so great I couldn't bare to ignore.
...
Read full text

Coreena Dejesus
COMMENTS
K. V. Venkataramana 19 January 2018

I thoroughly enjoyed your well-written poem!

0 0 Reply

I loved it!

0 0 Reply
Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 October 2008

Beautifully written.....................

0 0 Reply
Roger Cornish 27 March 2008

Nice poem.... You get the imagery right! rx.

0 0 Reply
Sue Crocker 06 March 2008

This is bittersweet and emotional. Well done, I enjoyed reading it very much. Sue x

0 0 Reply
Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
Close
Error Success