029: Sleeping Beauty Comments

This is a quite excellent free style poem, Colin, most wonderfully composed and expressed and very vivid in it's imagery. Your outstanding descriptive words 'hooked' the reader from the first line to the end of this fine poem. Carl.

You write with passion about the neck, the skin, and curves. But! It's the feet that make your heart skip a beat. :) I love that. 'Dainty' feet at that! Deborah Cromer

Good morning Colin my brother....very passionate write....a wash of loving verses that dive into the soul...melting the hearts of many....brilliant piece....the ladies will love this poem....10+++

069: Prince Charming. Charming. Cheers. Subroto