It's said in Indian circles that the years of retirement
are the time when men choose the occupation
of their next life. So I'm sitting here on a fine Sunday
in a quiet London suburb, the very day when the geraniums
...
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Bravo Zulu, to borrow naval usage - why does it seem I am always borrowing - lol!
depth, perception and wit. I very much enjoyed this poem, Michael
Very believable and nicely done. Your details are just right...the geraniums and the sun, the poets savvy cat, the mundane college class, and the ending is superb.
Bravo, Michael...simply bravo...right on...I truly enjoyed this...I am very envious in that I wish I could come up with creative thinking such as you have displayed here...very well done...I applaud you, my friend... Lare
I LOVE it! Some of your phrases were truly wonderful, especially: 'unacknowledged legislators of mankind' 'united state of mind'. Your 'wordplay' is a lesson in excellence and the wry humor of the piece had me chuckling throughout. CLR