Sunday, April 3, 2005

0281 A Mid-Atlantic Voice Comments

Rating: 2.3

It's said in Indian circles that the years of retirement
are the time when men choose the occupation
of their next life. So I'm sitting here on a fine Sunday
in a quiet London suburb, the very day when the geraniums
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COMMENTS
Cheri Leigh 10 September 2005

I LOVE it! Some of your phrases were truly wonderful, especially: 'unacknowledged legislators of mankind' 'united state of mind'. Your 'wordplay' is a lesson in excellence and the wry humor of the piece had me chuckling throughout. CLR

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Samuel Nze 08 April 2005

Bravo Zulu, to borrow naval usage - why does it seem I am always borrowing - lol!

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Rich Hanson 06 April 2005

depth, perception and wit. I very much enjoyed this poem, Michael

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Raynette Eitel 06 April 2005

Very believable and nicely done. Your details are just right...the geraniums and the sun, the poets savvy cat, the mundane college class, and the ending is superb.

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Jeffrey Spahr-Summers 03 April 2005

Very nice Michael! I say Bravo as well!

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Lare Austin 03 April 2005

Bravo, Michael...simply bravo...right on...I truly enjoyed this...I am very envious in that I wish I could come up with creative thinking such as you have displayed here...very well done...I applaud you, my friend... Lare

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