When I went to
His dwellig place,
He asked:
Why did you come
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Very poignant and beautiful. Keep on shining Premji. You are a candle.10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra
well, we have different facets in life...multigenre actors on dfferent scenes of a single life drama...the world, as a whole, doesn't care much about an individual...good poem...unusual concept well handled...congrats...10
Very well said... Truthful and insightful... An impressive write indeed... Thanks for sharing...10 +++
Premji, i am really impressed- this is amazing- who cares what the world thinks as long as you are loved by your dear ones and Him. who am i, not a nobody. you are the universe, and the universe is within you.10 no beating about the bush, your style is penetrating and incisive. Mamta
A nice poem. Yes the last lines are marvllous.10 for it.
When I went to the world, They told: You are Nobody.......................excellent work pal..... Fahim
What counts most is that you knew yourself better than other... what you are and where you stand! A 10.
The world is a fickle lover, Do not worry - When The universal lover God And the encircling hearts Of near and dear loving be What right has the world To label or call anyone A 'Nobody' - When It has done, nothing to us?