(027) My Mood Swings…… Comments

A wonderful poem with a mixture of subtle analogies and a language which easily adapts to each and every mood of the poem. A poem of rare honesty and candour. Like the theme, your poem also swings between a confession and self-criticism. Usually we blame it on others for all the shortcomings that we have. But I hope you are not following the truly 'religious Christian' practise of sinning for six days and confessing on Sunday. lol. Love Raghavan

Hi Risha, Without highs and lows, there would be no in betweens. We all have our good and bad days, that is what keeps life interesting. It makes us look more closely at what we have and appreciate it more intensely. Love this write :)

Rhyming nicely. Moods always change. Life is like that.

Your mood swings subtly between those words. I can see that my dear little friend. The firmament is wide open for you. Make sure you keep my moods swinging too :) so I can write better. God bless.

Without mood swings it would be difficult to write effective poetry. Nice write, Risha. Kind wishes, Sandra

it; s growth. take care

it all about growing up thats a fab poem by the way