Monday, June 13, 2005

0265 Tongue Comments

Rating: 2.3

strange name for a pet yeah?
but that's what I call it
and it knows its name
so we get along OK
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Michael Shepherd
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Raynette Eitel 13 June 2005

Too funny...and extremely creative. This is one I'd like to give to certain people. Raynette

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Andrew Konisberg 13 June 2005

quirky little number, Michael. I thought you did more than merely pay the topic 'lip-service'...this piece 'spoke' to me on many levels...in all seriousness though, I really enjoyed the style...dash of alliteration here, great chunk of humour there...offbeat and fresh and I'll take your 'word' for it, but honest too.

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Uriah Hamilton 13 June 2005

Super cool poem, Michael!

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Ghada Shahbender 13 June 2005

Brilliant thought. Tongue should not be trained for the circus or be put on a leash or in a cage. That is unhuman and intolerable at times. I'm often saddened to see a friend lose his or her Tongue or worse still give it up to someone else (usually to someone who does not care much for the pet) .

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Michael Shepherd

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