Thursday, September 28, 2006

(026) Topsy Turvy House.......(My Favourite) Comments

Rating: 2.7

My house is always upside down
It is the funniest house in town
If you throw waste in a dustbin
Or any different type of tin
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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Someone Else 23 March 2007

nice story poem-strong beginning, good build up-approaching a great ending - then ----- see message

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 March 2007

It sounds like a Students house... Risha

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Diane Violet 21 November 2006

This is so cute and funny Risha, thank you for the smile.

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Asma Bahrainwala 05 November 2006

haha.... this one's cuute.. Asma...

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Prasanna Kumari 09 October 2006

i wanted to write like this, Risha.but you wrote it for me.

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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