Sunday, April 12, 2009

026: Peter Comments

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<font color=green>It was in 1968 to Dunfermline
we were shipped
For four years of Apprenticeship
To be in The Navy and see the Sea
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Colin Johnston
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Fiona Davidson 24 April 2009

This is such a beautifuly described memory Colin...so vivd with a touch of poignancy to it...Fi 10+++

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very intense in retrospect, a poem of torment written in tranquility. Bravo!

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Christine Kerr 21 April 2009

A nice story about an old friend, It's amazing when you feel so close to someone how the writing flows so smoothly and from deep within. Great thoughts and memories Colin.10++

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