0259 Who Am I Not? Comments

Excellent poem. 10! Sincerely Ronberge

I can only nod in agreement with Max and Raynette.

This should be required reading for every budding young poet who finds himself/herself in love and wants to write a love poem. This is a love poem at its finest. Raynette

starts with a wallop! I find the first two stanzas, especially, wonderful.

this is brilliant, Michael. struck a chord on the old heartstrings. (Gmaj7, i believe) . Jake

yes mister shepard it is one of your strong points you seem to be able to write about Love very well and this is an example of your craft so if i like it i have to give a ten Warm regards allan

Surprised at the low rating of this....I think it's worth a ten! Who has not felt this way? I think everyone has had this feeling at one time or another. Good one!

So how come your name's dropped off my 'also read' list? Shucks.

I like this Michael, although it does remind me of the one whose name seems to be a bit taboo on this site. You know, California, in the sixties. But it touched a nerve in me, pleasantly. H