Monday, January 9, 2006

0257 When The Heart Melts Comments

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sometimes,
some wonder times,
I read a poem here and
instantly want, because
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Michael Shepherd
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Ernestine Northover 09 January 2006

That's a lovely thought Michael, and I know what you mean, it's an instant joining of minds. Lovely poem.Thanks. Love Ernestine XXX

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Joseph Daly 09 January 2006

Excellent capturing of a thought Micheal, suggesting a need to change but in a complete way. Suddenly realising the impossibity, there is a resignation to the self but a reaffirmation of love.

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nbila alan 09 January 2006

HI VERY NICE POEM WISH TO READ ALL UR POEMS

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Michael Philips 09 January 2006

This is so sensitive and introspective. I like the honesty and positive ending as well as the tension between wanting and not wanting to live the life of the other poet.

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Charles Chaim Wax 09 January 2006

a beautiful revelation so well expressed delving into the secret heart and giving that gift to all a fine poem

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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