Saturday, September 17, 2005

0252 To My Elder Brothers Comments

Rating: 2.3

I think of you more often nowadays, I don’t know why;
how is it now with you?
And are you still somewhere – if you ever were -
that I might talk to you?
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Michael Shepherd
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Mary Nagy 17 September 2005

Michael, this is the most touching, heartfelt poems I have ever read on this site. This is a true sadness and for that, I really respect and admire this poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Raynette Eitel 17 September 2005

Michael, I wept when I read this and am still weeping. I have never miscarried, but you have certainly identified the grief associated, and as the survivor of those miscarriages, it is so touching that you still miss your brothers. It tells me so much about your character and the tenderness in your heart. This is beautifully rendered and I will put it in my favorites. Raynette

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