Thursday, April 9, 2009

024: The House Comments

Rating: 5.0

<font color=blue>The house was hers and no one else's
She's lived there over fifty years
To pay the bills if it was needed
Was what we sought for later years
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Colin Johnston
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Deborah Cromer 24 July 2009

Harsh reality written out well. A very hard subject to write about and you did an excellent job. DC

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Christine Kerr 21 April 2009

This kind of abuse plus more happens more then we think by siblings. It shocks me to think these spoiled brats think their parents owe them. Great write in a reminder to never completely depend on anyone person for your surviva.10+++

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~ Jon London ~ 11 April 2009

Another fine write from you Colin, its a joy to view your work

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