The sun is creeping above the hills
Giving an orangish tinge to the sky
The sky turns a beautiful shade of colors
As the early birds fly by
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Risha's imagination goes sky high and is beyond description. How could this young girl write such an excellent poem, I really wonder! She has turned herself to be a plant, while narrating a day of its life. I wish her many more greater heights in this world of poetry.
WOW. For Someone so young your an excellent poet! Keep writing! I loved the imagry and the part where the bee fell over. Great work and brilliant choice of words and flow. Best wishes. Rissa: -)
oh little princess.................really beautiful...........keep up ur good wrk..... a gr8 future lies ahead of you..........gr8 write up.. lovely way to express the feelings of the plants.......this sure must be the real way they think and feel..........lovely lil princess.........beautiful love n hugs dolly! !
This is so full of beautiful (realistic) imagery- almost as if Risha shrunk herself down to mite-sized a, nd looked out upon the world all day from inside a plants eyes Truly magical and amazing.