Sunday, August 27, 2006

(023) Resting Place (Haiku) Comments

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Butterfly visits
Momentarily seeks home
everlasting peace
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Melvina Germain
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Thufail Ahmed 10 July 2007

So thought provoking and beautiful haiku.

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Lisa Wilkinson 29 March 2007

Love the peace and innocence of the butterfly Mel. These are one of my favourites along side rainbows. Thanks for sharing your talent.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 12 October 2006

Beautiful and sad.........the short lived butterflies where they come from and where do they go nobody knows?

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Tailor Bell 21 September 2006

beautiful on the outside but carries a dark reminder of life's shortness within. lovely work, Melvina. -Tailor

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Barbara James 04 September 2006

I really love this poem, Melvina. Great work

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nn mn 27 August 2006

Haiku? Bless You! Seriously, very pretty - as pretty as a... butterfly.

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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