Monday, September 22, 2008

(022) How Many Poets Does It Take To Put Out A Candle? (Re-Post) Comments

Rating: 5.0

You’re not like a gas flame
or I would see a point of nothingness
at your base
That invisible rush of expectancy
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Danny Reynolds
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Raynette Eitel 23 September 2008

What child has never played with candle wax and made 'bathing caps for finger tips? ' And what poet has never stared at a flame flickering in a candle and build dream poems from the dancing flame? This is not only fine writing, but extremely creative...like we've come to expect from you. Love it! Raynette

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Gillian.E. Shaw 22 September 2008

Skilled form. The words of the poem burning and racing along. Liked this.

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Matt Mondschein 22 September 2008

Danny: Great poem, I was actually thinking of a hard on melting after an orgasm Matt

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Danny Reynolds

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