Saturday, July 19, 2008

(021) My Luck Abandoned Me Comments

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Ever since I set foot in school for my new academic year
It looks like luck has abandoned me
My bus came late to pick me up for school
So guess who is punished, me!
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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Ershad Mazumder 26 July 2008

Congratulations Risha. Good picture and painting. Keep on writing. Have great life.

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, aryaindia 22 July 2008

You write so simply and so easily. I am so happy to see your work here. Keep writing, Risha, you shine. Arya.

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 19 July 2008

a nice poem, but it has lost it's rhyme as your thoughts were in pressure, you wanted to send them out. Nicely penned anyway. Kolitha Uncle

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Cochin(India)
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