0207 Hover Fly Comments

Spot on, Denis. Stuck out like a sore...cliché... Thanks. I've amended it.

Michael. This is great, there is an element of spontenaity to it, bet also it is as if you took the sensation and thought about it. I love that this ends on 'presumably', it certainly shows the strength of that word. I think that the bit about 'like what I've just written' is what gives it the feeling of immediacy. I am not sure about the inclusion of that.