(02) - Victim Of The Dead Comments

Omg. You are sooo good. I've never head of another Grengs before. I'm Janelle grengs. =D I wonder if we are related...? Great poems though. I loved it. =]

The comment I just wrote was supposed to read: 'personal angst and dread'

The first ten or so lines of this work begin to express a sense of personal angst and fread that many can relate to. I have to say I was disappointed to see the rest of it take a downhill turn into something like bedtime scary stories that children tell each other at a slumber party. I just think that you have got some real intensity in you and I want to see more of it!

i did enjoy it a lot! On the whole I love horror style! best wishes Aram

Little scary...but very creative and enjoyable to read. I like it! :) adria

Even better then the first, oh if you are weirdin out cus youu don't recognize the name don't worry, you know me. J. S.