ସମୟ ର ସ୍ୱର - 02 (The Voices Of Time-02/ Odia Poem) Comments

ହସୁଥାଏ କିରି କିରି, ବିଧବା ର ଲଲାଟ ରେ ମଲା ଜହ୍ନ, ସମୟ ର - ନଈ ସେପାରି ରେ ।। Lovely poem Sharing. I enjoy this poem 10+±++++±+++±

A very beautiful and symbolic poem that very well describes the voice of time in the most perfect way. Love the lines at the end. 10

ନୀଳ ନୀଳ ଲୁହ ବିନ୍ଦୁ ଦୂର ଅତୀତ ର, ଝଲସନ୍ତି, ଚୁପ ଚାପ ଦୂର ତାଳ ବଣେ ।। Voice of silence so nicely narrated in this poem. 10+++ for it.

Very fine write, good one

Simply it's an excellent poem..loved reading it.....10

ହସୁଥାଏ କିରି କିରି, ବିଧବା ର ଲଲାଟ ରେ ମଲା ଜହ୍ନ, ସମୟ ର - ନଈ ସେପାରି ରେ ।। A nice sketch of a tragic voice of time. 10+++