.02) The Stars Comments

And always I wanted to stop, and enjoy, and stare, and pray, But a motor inside me was going too fast, And in vans or cars I sped back to cities To undo my mind's Tightly wound springs. Absolutely brilliant, thankyou Max Love Duncan x

Max - The beauties of life's experiences are always there waiting for us to see them. I think later on in life we finally have clear vision. And what a blessing that we do open our eyes and souls before the journey is over. A beautiful piece of writing here.........thank you! Linda

The Canopy of Heaven was still there - what perfect phrasing. Scarlett

Dear Max, the passion and innocense have brought us a wonderful poem to lift the soul.Love Duncan

brilliant....nothing more nothing less...excellent pen my friend