02 (Sakuntala) Visit To The Hermitage Comments

You train the readers on the events in your write with interest not lagging any time.

An amazing work.10 for it.

Stop the chariot here, Far away, at a distance, From this holy place.” “We should not cause, Any kind of disturbance, Or even an inconvenience To the residents of this place.” The king's respect and worship towards eco systems has been well brought out in these stanzas...

i wonder that you have written a great epic story in simple language with proper metering...love this writing..

Descriptive passages that glow with serenity. An other worldly place that could be shattered by crass behavior. a beautiful, exotic write. Warm regards, Sandra