Who yarns in the morn on a tub
Smiles on the road under a litchi tree
Shies to open eyelids if sun stops beaming
Hesitates to move keeping zero pase?
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''Who comes into flower on the air- with unalike petals without calyx? '' very true, only purity of love...can save...10++
Very beautiful poem, and this does sound nicely... 10..../ Thank you for yours pleasant comments, shraful./ Best wishes, Tsira
There's also a feeling of dispersion, disintegration described in a very good style.
love and compassion, empathy and sympathy interfused with metaphors enchanting
Nice treat. But a bit abstract to me. Regards dr. sakti 14.08.09.