02 Night Sky Comments

'Moon is our guide towards success and Sun Is the path of success Work hard in light, to get reward in night.' Very nice.

hello boy a nicely driven Philosophical slab. keep going :)

hi akhil, you're very talented for your age. well, i must say keep writing.

A well lived day - Brings a night, Full of fun and joy Else it becomes A time to grieve. Well said in this poem. Thank you, young poet.

A very nice write, my friend. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you C R Clark

I really enjoyed reading this poem. Very interesting. I loved the last two lines. Good Work.

Very good.good feel & nice imagination.